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Post by Celestial Dancer on Dec 2, 2006 14:58:38 GMT -5
a tattered quilt...
heavy with patches of loyalty woven tight in Mama’s embrace and bound with blue sprigs of faded hope remnants,
cornered with uneven squares of Daddy’s handkerchief, endlessly soaked with broken heart scented tears,
tied to swatches of hard knocks and mis-matched scraps of reckless liberties,
sprinkled with discolored stains of ripened sensibility,
flaunting the odd rip from jagged claws of disappointment’s rage,
peppered with holes chewed by time hungry moths of impatience…
answering a new day’s silent urge to draw it close and smell musty familiar of lessons rent, being warmed in hand-me-down gratitude against the chill of what could've happened…
@2006 DRK
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Post by neil on Dec 3, 2006 21:27:49 GMT -5
.line by line trickling down the page you show the reader parts of what it IS ... it is this it is that once upon a time it was this under these circumstances it was like that this ........that this ........that this ........that adding / combining / mix-and-matching history / experience / faithfulness and then .... this is what it DOES ....answering a new day’s silent urge to draw it close and smell musty familiar of lessons rent, being warmed in hand-me-down gratitude against the chill of what could've happened…the difference between taking a long, slow walk down Memory Lane and putting your hand and heart to the thing that is nearest. excellent. a pleasure to read. your friend in words. neil.
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Post by upfromsumdirt on Dec 4, 2006 5:37:01 GMT -5
my 3 sisters shanghai'd me to the indianapolis museum of art a few weeks ago to see the gee's bend travelling quilt exhibit... ...they all some 'seamstresses' of various skills - u'da thought they was goin to a stevie wonder concert... or peabo bryson (u'd hafta know them!) - the museum was real nice, the time spent with my sisters was beautiful... i love em/god bless em. but what woulda made the quilt exhibit REALLY DOPE is if we coulda snuck in one night and wrote i mean, incorporated! our poems onto them! that wouldabeen fresh as hell... specially this piece... its beautiful... ...that first line is A MONSTER! u writ gud. (will move this thang down into one of the poetry forums, unless this is whair u intended it)
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Post by Celestial Dancer on Dec 4, 2006 14:49:12 GMT -5
neil - oh how I love they way your mental fondles my ink~ Uncle Dirty, move on....and I love the reverence you communicate when referencing your sisters...it's a beautiful thing indeed!
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